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**EDIT**
I fixed the cloud in front of the moon
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Another 100 Themes Challenge Picture!
I decided to start requesting critiques so I can learn my strenghths and weaknesses, so feel free to express how this picture makes ya feel, no hard feelings ^^
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Well, I rushed the lineart for this picture X'D. FAIL. So I covered it up with grass, YAY FOR GRASS!!! ^o^
I hope the background makes up for it...
Anyhow, I took
's advice from earlier and made the clouds swirly...Thanks SO much, that really made this picture better 
So that's that :3
I fixed the cloud in front of the moon
--
Another 100 Themes Challenge Picture!
I decided to start requesting critiques so I can learn my strenghths and weaknesses, so feel free to express how this picture makes ya feel, no hard feelings ^^
~~~
Well, I rushed the lineart for this picture X'D. FAIL. So I covered it up with grass, YAY FOR GRASS!!! ^o^
I hope the background makes up for it...
Anyhow, I took
's advice from earlier and made the clouds swirly...Thanks SO much, that really made this picture better So that's that :3
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactBefore I start, I'd like to say, I really, really like this! You did a fantastic job overall, and it's so cute! c:
I really love the way you did the clouds; They turned out so nicely! And using the grass to cover up any mistakes in the lineart is clever. c; I'd like to suggest not using the grass brush though- I can understand that that is a LOT of grass to draw, but! If you draw each grass stroke yourself, it can look a lot more original, and unique! Still, the grass brush is there for a reason, and I'm guilty of using it myself, so the piece still looks nice even with it. ^^
The only other thing I can think to point out is the shading on the cloud in front of the moon. It looks fine really, but if you had made the cloud itself a bit lighter where the moon is behind it (Sorry, I think I worded that weirdly..) to kinda show that the moon is shining through, it'd look even better. That's about all I can point it, you did a really great job with this!